This whole article was not very well done. My 15 year old son ,who hates writing, could have done a better job. Sad what is acceptable in journalism these days.
Problem is that there is no money in journalism now days. Most newspapers are either out of business already or heading towards bankruptcy. Newspapers laid all of their editors off years ago and are now moving in to the writers. Many of them are trying to rely on inexperienced writers that they can get away with paying bottom dollar.